Week 12 - Assessing Final Motion-Graphic

Looking at final motion-graphic frames -

Self Critique on Motion-Graphic:

This colour scheme and the layouts work very well. Everything is legible and clear, the text is softened quite a lot giving the white more of a pale blue colour. The illustrations look clear and simple and I am feeling as though the progression from the introduction through to where the graphic gets very text heavy is a good transition with the colours showing the topic has gotten very serious.

By laying out like this I feel as though I can see which spreads have slight problems with the spacing of the type, and I can see where I will refine this slightly to ensure the motion-graphic is very successful for hand in tomorrow.

Target Audience -

This motion-graphic does work well for the audience intended being youth-young adults, leaving home and realising their impact and what they have wasted. The facts are clear for this age bracket with very light illustrations with changes and developments to keep interest.
I have asked many other people around my age (20) to look at this illustration and see how they feel about it and if they are interested and going to take action on this topic.
I got some good feedback from this criteria and feel as though the motion-graphic is successful in this way.

Viewing Website on a larger screen of a different computer - 

Although this website isn't the most successful or best it still looks nice on a computer screen with the colour scheme working nicely with the video. The links and what is written on the page continue to as a narrative to what the video was discussing. 

The illustration on the left of the webpage is distracting and I feel as though I need to remove it.