Refinement of Motion Graphic - Development
Working further on the colour scheme, the transitions and the backgrounds to make the motion graphic more interesting. This is starting to look much more refined and interesting with the designs looking nice and successful. The only thing I could work on now is the refinement of the text at the end positioning it more centred on the page instead of from the same above alignment.
I will also from here show and get some critiques from others about how they feel and whether they like the motion graphic -
Colour Scheme Change from Kristen Mabey on Vimeo.
Critiques from others -
The sound could get turned down as at times the music overpowers the voice over. The alignment with the fridge looks funny and the spacing needs changing. It may also be too long in length? But maybe this is because of the music, so we could try a few variations and see what works best for the final. Otherwise the graphics and transitions look good and work.
So some of the transitions are a bit fast and a bit harsh on the eye. Also at the start with the truck that's hard to look at because it goes to fast. The voice needs to be recorded again because there were pops from speaking to loud and the music needs to be quieter but it looks really nice good job.
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