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Further Critique Motion Graphic -
Curning and leading on text - all lettering tighterOpacity on type - soften white 80% and blue
Use a lighter blue
Type could left aligned and same text size.
Rubbish pile on the light background - doesn't work that great.
Lighter background?
Try lighter yellow coins
Tidy spacing on stop - Make it smaller?
Hang on logo
One frame shorter so there is no black at end
Take off names
This is looking way better and definitely progressed well since last week, finally starting to look resolved!
From here I will refine the final critiques and work on positioning the motion graphic into a webpage.
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